Coursework: Ignite presentation learner response

 1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

Research: 4

video/magazine:4

Language:4

Representations:3

Audience and industry:4

Delivery:5

Total:24

Great opening slide, Band name works but you can always change, nice opening.

Does Nike fit for Blink-182?

Like the music magazine name, may need to think about the weekly element

Love the slide on inspirations, shows great research

Using these videos as inspirations works along with media language comments

Presentation is great, great use of images

Teenage movie/romcom element is really good, get theory in

Need to add to representation

Distribution element could be expanded on

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW: Overall the idea works via the idea of Y2K and the narrative works too. The band name too is short and snappy and has the potential to be iconic.

EBI: I think I needed to be more swift with the slides and speak a bit quicker as the slides felt too quick for me.

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

One thing I definitely need to update is my plan for narrative. Originally and at the time of creating the slideshow I was set in stone on a basic narrative to live performance with normal actors, but now Ive decided to integrate an animated aspect through stop motion with Lego minifigures. However currently i dont hold the capability to pull this off as i currently dont posess the right bricks to make the right set, however this isnt a hard problem to solve and should be sorted soon. Other than that though i have my locations set in stone and everything else i need prop wise is found in the music rooms.