Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. Teacher: Lots to credit here – Lego stop motion is difficult! I really liked the rain and the two characters and house scene. Simply reflecting the lyrics in Lego stop motion is difficult and I think you do it pretty well here. The biggest issue is the wide shot/background and also the moving camera / inconsistent camera shot. These are a killer in stop-motion. How did you do the lightning? Everything will need to be 100% original in the final coursework. Will you have a performance element too – could you do a Lego stop motion band? Was it deliberately in 4:3 or will you use widescreen for the main production? Also need branding/graphic identity and footwear element. Class: Cool video Good editing Matched the song Unique Needed more water 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three
